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Short GH2 film - A summer in Belorussia
  • Hello there,

    This was my first try with the GH2 2 years ago, with none specific knowledge about movie making. I'm a pure newbie. I tried to make an atmospheric short about things I felt while in vacation in Belorussia. I'am aware of all the technical defaults of this little thing, but I'm eager to read your advices about rhythm, editing and story telling.

    Have a nice one and thank you in advance if you watch this!

    On youtube:

    On vimeo:

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  • @suzres Thank you Hervé. And yes I like I+II+III+ I think that this kind of work could give me ideas for my current project. I particularly like the variety of textures and patterns. I'm very open for suggestions of videos like this one. Please do not hesitate to give me some advice! (I see that you're probably french, are you far from Paris?)

    @DanPV Yes! I have a new project, a title keeps appearing in my mind : "Nothing Personal". I'd like to take images from various older videos of my own and put them together with shots of Paris I'm currently working on. And work deeper in the direction of lenght (the feeling of time). Can't say to much right now, have to work more on this before getting a final idea. And thank you for your support! Please do not hesitate to share your work too :)

    @Vitaliy_Kiselev Yes it is... I also credited personal-view (Thanks section) in the closing credits of the video :) Have a nice one!

  • @Sulph

    Cool, really cool.

  • @sulph - wow, that's great news! I knew there was something special about OKNA when I saw it. Do you have any other projects in the works that we can look forward to?

  • Congratulations You made a very sensitive film Thank you Perchais you might like this

    All the best Hervé

  • Hello,

    Just to say that OKNA

    has been awarded with the Best Editing prize of the last edition of http://www.laguarimba.com/ film festival in Italy last august.

    If personal-view wasn't existing I would have probably not buy a new camera (GH2) and this video wouldn't exist. It has been spotted here or on vimeo by the festival staff. It will also be screened in another festival in Porto, Portugal, next week.

    So thanks for existing, keep on the good work, thank you again for your kind words and cheers to you all :)

  • @whynot Hope that your friend is doing OK, and that she's still on the road to make a movie. Bye!

  • Hello guys,

    I know that my little contribution here is not off topic, but it is not what you'd like to listen right now (GH4 feedback - for me : boring). Anyway, to be straight I have been contacted by a member of the staff of a new and very popular short film festival, asking me to submit my film : http://www.laguarimba.com/ => on vimeo, I wasn't asking for anything.

    I did so without any hope, but my film has been chosen.

    My first will was to pleased my step father with some travel movie. He didn't liked it. It ended-up being in a film festival.

    It would have never been possible without your (our) community (I don't know how) - but I know that it is.

    Let's face it. You're the best DSLR community on the web.

    Greetings to all.

    This new short film festival : http://www.laguarimba.com/ will rise.

  • It's effective. She started saving to hit the road with her camera and not think so much!

  • @ whynot just let me know if it is effective. For your friends I mean. If not, I will try to do better next time :-)

    @ radikalfilm You're right, I poorly chose my words. I will reply to your question (my background) in PM.

  • I did not call you a fraud, wtf, what does that even mean in this context. Diablo is very good for what it is, never breaks character for a second, I would have taken it for a 1920's studio production without a second thought. I didn't get the ending though, don't bother to explain :)

    Again the fact that you "have a lot to share about editing and storytelling" comes through in this first effort of yours. "Normal" people just don't have the skill or mindset. So, AS A PROFESSIONAL, I get cognitive dissonance when I look at your results and I read your statements of newbiness (is that a word).

    So if you're not a professional of movie-making (editor, director, etc), and these are your only two projects, but (obviously) know editing/juxtaposition and storytelling, then what is your professional background? Inquiring minds want to know. You could be a writer; a screenwriter would make you a professional. A playwright?

    Since you're in Europe yes there could be space for (paid) work between us, when I have the right project for you. I'm purely commercial these days so I'd have to see what you can do in 3min or less.

  • very nice! I send link to friends to motivate them :-)

  • Sorry but I forgot one thing. If you are wondering how such a noob can edit a film in this way, I can elaborate. I have a lot to share about editing and story telling techniques. Just tell me, I love it, and I'm eager to talk about it!

  • @radikalfilm Thank you again. I'm sure you can imagine what's the impact of such cheering comments about this short : it's beautiful. But on the other side, I can't let you say that I'm a fraud, a disguised professional trying to lure people for a mysterious (and obviously vain) reason.

    I already toned down the fact this was my first movie on this thread by admitting that I had a first experience in 1998. With a group of friends we made a short I was directing, but a true team effort. Between this experience (a little disappointing - I said to myself : too easy to make a film - and you will see I was wrong cause the film has a lot of problems) and this "montage" I did nothing.

    So no, I'm not a professional of movie making, I never did any editing between 2001 and 2013. To be clear, I have lost my job, and I'm currently unemployed. Witch gave me the time to make this short in order to satisfy my family. Nothing less, nothing more.

    Once again, this response is not personal. I'm very proud that you liked my work. And if you're looking for someone to work with you, I'm completely available!

    Have a good one ;-)

    My 1998 short on Youtube :

  • "technical". You did montage, he's the father of montage. I'm having difficulties believing it is your first film; it might be as a shooter (awesome by the way), but you clearly have storytelling background - perhaps you're a film/video editor and glossed over that detail.

  • @radikalfilm Why Eisenstein? Because it was shot in ex Soviet Union or for technical "similarities"? I particularly enjoyed the first part of Ivan the terrible. Anyway, thank you for the kind words :-)

  • Eisenstein's spiritual child paints with his first stroke a story for the heart. Statically framed bushes everywhere burst in flames, regardless of GOP length.

  • thought it would be but even so it's nice. I can't be bothered watching most TV but I could watch your short again.

  • @belfryman Thank you. In fact most of the footage was stabilized in post using Premiere CS6 :)

  • You must have a steady hand! Gorgeous images, fantastic use of sound, lovely feel. Really enjoyed it, thank you.

  • @ognistik Thank you! Because a lot of people seemed to like this short, I decided to make another one. I'm currently on it (though it may take a while). I will try to shoot in better conditions, as this one (OKNA) was shot hand held without any hack. Thanks again for your comment!

  • Wow. This is totally awesome. To tell you the truth I've seen so many traveling GH2 videos, bunch of tests, and a lot of short films, but for me this was much more meaningful than so many others. It has a lot of reality, raw moments that you caught with beautiful composition and light, and the edit/music goes really well together. Very real, sentimental, nostalgic, and pretty much like a portrait of life. Congratulations on the great job. I love the part at 3:15 with the laughing. Even though I don't understand a word, it still made me smile :)

    don't stop making films!

  • @DanPV Thank you for the video, I like it, but the main character is a little bit overplayed. Yes the quick cut in the tunnel is disturbing and works quite well. Again thank you for sharing things with me.

    To everyone on this forum, Happy New year, I hope the best for this community and for everyone of you!

    Cheers :)

  • Wow. Nice shots. Keep shooting. You have a sweet eye.

  • @sulph

    Just came across this video. The quick cut entering the train tunnel at 2:35 reminds me of your film at 1:16 when your plane lands - very effective!

  • @DanPV I have watched the film of the two guys in Canada. Well, what can I say, it is like a commercial. Like they are selling something. But for their defense I had cold feets when they walked barefoot in the river. Good luck for them! :)

    @jpbturbo @oscillian Thank you, so glad you liked it. Merci !

    @Alienhead Thank you! And thanks again for the link, I didn't know this director at all, and I think I will try to find her work and watch it.

    I think I will upgrade my vimeo account to upload a significantly better file.

    Have a good one!