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Does anyone else think this Jay Z short Doc is brilliant?
  • So much Aliasing, noise,blown out highlights and shaky footage but its better than 99% of anything I have seen posted on here.

    I've said it many time in the past on camera/filmmaking forums but I wish more discussion was based on the art of filmmaking not pixel peeping/tech discussion. There should be a section on film discussion, theory, what works etc...

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  • Well, topic closed.

  • @Caveport The only guy I see with one of those long time badges Matt-GH2, agreed with me and said Amen, I even made a comment to reply to what he said, he seemed polite and offered an example of what I was talking about which I tried to check out FYI but I don't have Netflix, Very positive. You however......

    So maybe you shouldn't assume why people leave forums, who knows it could be due to people like you...

  • @ipcmir I watched the first 5 minutes of your clip. Honestly I don't know what you are seeing that makes you think this is comparable to the Jay-Z promo. Honestly I can't get into your head and eyes but I see something 100% different.

    If anything it proves my point that crappy shots and cheesy editing can either look like a 90's reality show or a stylish documentary. Its all in the eye I guess.

  • Just for reference, suresure has been a member on this forum for about one month. I'm now beginning to understand why Driftwood and some others don't frequent this forum very often these days. I do find it interesting that suresure does not ask questions of the experienced forum members who have replied to his original post. In my experience attacking other people's point of view indicates a lack of confidence or maturity. I no longer care about this 'discussion'.

  • are these documentaries or info-mercial-mentaries?

  • In 2005 the purveyors of cutting edge documentaries, VH1, decided to create a brilliant documentary called "NAS Driven" http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0794744/

    Armed to the teeth with people, Viacom's money, a few interns, and inspired by a few late night reruns of MTV Yo! Documentaries they decide to mix well lit interviews with purposeful cutting edge, gritty, blownout, and shaky footage of NYC buildings, bridges, and streets. The behind the scenes of the performances were also unbeeeheelievable!!! They even thought of layering some video on top of each other! Unheard of!!!

    You know what was more amazing that creating this doc with a rapper and that style? All this was to be seen in the first 2 minutes of the documentary!!!! Uhhhhhh-mazzziiiiing!!

    You know whats more amazing? 5 years later in 2010 a vodka ad was created with a rapper as the central protagonist. Well, that and not a single review of the original brilliant doc has a review up on IMDB is amazing, but that's beside the point.

    Armed to the teeth with people, Absolut vodka's money, a few interns, and inspired by a few late night reruns of MTV Yo! Documentaries and VH1's Driven they decide to mix well lit interviews with purposeful cutting edge, gritty, blownout, and shaky footage of NYC buildings, bridges, and streets. The behind the scenes of the performances were also unbeeeheelievable!!!

    Absolut, rapper, and a few others approved ad. All was good until...

    Amazingly another 5 years later a guy scouring Youtube hits upon the Absolut Vodka ad. Taken in by the "beautiful" purposeful cutting edge, gritty, blownout, and shaky footage of NYC buildings, bridges, and streets. He declares on a forum "Does anyone else think this Jay Z short Doc is brilliant?" which of course is only a title. That's not what he meant, He meant the" Vodka Promo is really good even though it has many shots we might normally say are unusable and substandard like aliasing and noise'

    But enough of that! I present to you.... "VH1's Nas Driven"

  • @suresure123

    Keep calm, do not start any conflicts.

    Live with simple fact that everyone opinion can be different. And many people do not care for your opinion at all.

  • Its a forum thing but I find people make way more of the title of threads than the actual message typed in the OP. I could of worded it 'I think this Vodka Promo is really good even though it has many shots we might normally say are unusable and substandard like aliasing and noise' (Retard Version)

    But that would be trying to make my point in a one line title rather than the OP which is what people are supposed to actually read. So go back and read the actual OP and then get back to me. Cause if you haven't even read the OP then you don't have the right to argue anything, period.

    CAUSE MY POINT WAS CLEAR TO ANY FOOL.

    Crappy shots which most on here would critic as unusable noisy shots that weren't professional were used to make a professional piece that worked (Ok you can can say its not the best 10 minutes in movie history but i struggle to accept its like some amateurish piece of shit....of which I'm saying gets posted on here as work 99% of the time, and the fact remains it was a high profile promo, for a big brand and a big star...no one can deny that even if they hate it)

    SOOOO my point loud and friken clear WAS maybe we worry too much about perfect clean 'correct' shots and should focus on making something that is cohesive and not to only discuss ENDLESSLY for literally years thread after thread after threads on noise and aliasing etc and have more discussion on putting images together to portray something. So all this discussion about Oh it isn't really a Doc or oh its not brilliant or Oh its dated was completely not my point if you had spent 10 seconds to read what I was talking about. You read one line over and over again and then dived in to argue some stupid points, If you had spent just 1 minute reading what I had said in the first few posts you wouldn't of posted such irrelevant nonsense.

    IF you can't get this point then the only thing I have left to say is, Sorry for your learning disability but thats your problem not mine.

  • @suresure123 you said: "If you didn't want to see my point by now you won't, go back to your firmware threads, have a nice day.." Rudeness is not often an endearing feature of one's personality. I have tried to be civil in this discussion, but you are behaving rather badly when others disagree with you. What WAS your point anyway?

  • Isn't that wotten egg?

  • anyone who does not think this is a brilliant documentary is a rotten egg.

  • @suresure123 - I get the feeling you would start a fight in an empty room

  • I will copy paste in verbatim everytime you said "MY POINT" and i will copy paste my reply to it verbatim from the responses here in chronological order. You will see that I pretty much tried to listen and read what you wanted to say and pretty much replied directly to it. Thats it man. It's a forum after all.

    YOU: MY POINT was about the visual not some anti Capitalist rant that you seem to want....

    AH! You liked the visuals! I like some of the shots too! MY REPLY since you pointed out it was about the VISUALS:

    well, there are some nice shots. Is it a brilliant doc? No. But thats just me. It might be for you. For me it looks like a day in the life of Jay-Z, that's its....

    YOU: I wish people would put some energy into discussing the clip and not the bloody title worded wrongly or not.

    The images are very much possible with cheap cameras and limited resources which is MY POINT....

    MY POINT is simply as filmmakers we should focus on what we do as an art form not as a technician.

    AH! You want to say we can do this with cheap cameras and limited resources! This is art! We are not limited by money but by our imagination! Yes agree! But its not exactly a low budget/limited resources ad, MY REPLY:

    Your example video or whatever you want to call it was just a bad example for us who don't have a big crew or access to every piece of equipment.We know they had a big crew and a big budget. Why not use a video/film that looks awesome but was shot on DSLRs and tell people doesn't this look awesome even though it was shot on 2 crappy 5d mark 2s like indie game the movie...

    YOU: You argument against what I'm saying is I should of used only an example you like? .... MY POINT was about the art of filmmaking, about the craft,i.e. bringing together elements that collectively are worth more than the sum of the parts... not aping big budgets with shitty equipment. MY POINT is about being creative, yours is about being cheap when really you want the big budget. Not even the same conversation....

    The problem I really am talking about is when you said oh there are a few great shots in that short. Its not about nice shots, thats where I think all these forums fall down.

    AH! So now the point is not the visuals! Its not about the shots! Its about the art of filmaking making something greater than the sum of the parts. BUT I just told you this is a big budget ad with a gazillion people behind it. Something creative! I could not see the creativity in this jay-z vid, So I just ask you what parts should I sum up and what was so great about it by MY REPLY:

    So what was great about it? What was brilliant about it?

    What are the parts you are talking about? the parts that's go into this video are the people, equipment, actors/characters, money. They had unlimited people, equipment, and whole bunch of money. They had the most famous rapper maybe of all time as the subject and had access to MSG and the president of MSG. So was the video greater than the sum of the parts? Were they able to tell a compelling story?

    YOU in reply to me and another poster: Cause it pieced together shots that most on here would say are shit i.e. noisy, blown out, shaky and made something that looked good. MY POINT was not its the best example of filmmaking since the dawn the man.

    AH! So it is the visuals! You like the pieced together shots that were imperfect and it LOOKED good! Its not the art of filmaking since your point was NOT that it was the best example of filmaking! Or maybe it still is? Who knows by now? MY REPLY: if you think its brilliant that's your opinion and we respect that. For me it's not brilliant. It's not crap, but it's not brilliant. Putting together a sequence of lofi shots to establish locations in between clean talking heads clips does not push it to brilliant status for me. But that's just me. I could be wrong.

    YOU: I do respect your opinion. The opinion that doesn't bat an eyelid at a music promo that is exactly what I'm talking about, crap shots pulled together to make even less than the sum of the parts. And I will also respect your opinion that you don't have good taste. haha

    So I basically give up on getting any direction from your posts. MY REPLY: if you want to attack my personal preference and opinion that is fine with me. You were asking people if they think the jay-z ad was brilliant. i just thought it wasn't. I do really respect your opinion. beauty is in the eye of the beholder and something that is brilliant for you may not be for me.

  • @Caveport @ipcmir If you didn't want to see my point by now you won't, go back to your firmware threads, have a nice day..

  • @suresure123 It seems that you may be in minority in thinking that this promo is brilliant. Don't try to convince everyone else that your opinion is more correct. It's a valid opinion, but so is everyone's opinion. To me it's a tired looking corporate promo. Why try to convince me otherwise? You did not ask for independent critiques, you asked if others shared your opinion of the video being brilliant. People change over time. I have really enjoyed movies in my youth that I now think are crap. Now I have a better informed view of what is truly important in a piece of work. However, your opinion is perfectly valid.... for you.

  • @suresure123 if you want to attack my personal preference and opinion that is fine with me. You were asking people if they think the jay-z ad was brilliant. i just thought it wasnt. I do really respect your opinion. beauty is in the eye of the beholder and something that is brilliant for you may not be for me.

    Th reason why this thread is so all over the place is because you keep on saying "my point is" and it keeps on changing man.

  • @suresure123 - well that explains everything... indeed my suspicions were 100% on the mark - you have no grasp of the fundamental meaning of the words you ineptly attempt to use.

    The description of "dated" I gave, is indeed correct. My description was not of "retro" by any means - that you think so, merely proves you don't know what "retro" means either. Retro means "doing something in the style from the past" - which has NOTHING to do with "dated". My description was of "dated" not "retro" as you claim.

    Here, for your education - "Dated": http://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/dated

    "outmoded, out of fashion"

    Read what I wrote, and see how it matches - something fashionable at one time, but today no longer so etc.

    Meanwhile, "retro": http://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/retro

    "fashionably nostalgic or old-fashioned"

    which has NOTHING to do with what I wrote about "dated" - there is zero nostalgia about "dated". "Dated" is a negative descriptive, whereas "retro" is neutral (though can be positive). My description clearly referenced the negative aspect of "dated"... and there is NO negative aspect to just the term "retro".

    With this, I leave this discussion. You are unqualified in the simple use of terms. Sloppy and wrong use of the language leads to sloppy and wrong thinking. You have now proven abundantly ("documentary", "dated", "retro", "brilliant") the quality of your discourse. There is no value in interacting with you any further. You can have the last word, I won't bother responding.

    I guess we'll never learn what was "brilliant" about this "documentary". Ciao!

  • @ipcmir I do respect your opinion. The opinion that doesn't bat an eyelid at a music promo that is exactly what I'm talking about, crap shots pulled together to make even less than the sum of the parts. And I will also respect your opinion that you don't have good taste. haha

    http://www.personal-view.com/talks/discussion/comment/91561#Comment_91561

  • @suresure123 if you think its brilliant that's your opinion and we respect that. For me it's not brilliant. It's not crap, but it's not brilliant. Putting together a sequence of lofi shots to establish locations in between clean talking heads clips does not push it to brilliant status for me. But that's just me. I could be wrong.

    This guy's photography skills though are brilliant and he deserves to be one of the most well known photographers in the country. I'm sure he has made a video that will blow me away, it's just not this.

  • @RottenCarcass I didn't say you did, two other posters did however.....does everything have to be about you? LOL

    Anyway your definition is actually Retro, we don't say dated......its kind of 'dated' terminology in this instance....

    *Already said what I wanted to about the clip, i.e. shitty shots put together to make something good. If anything is getting old and trite its this discussion. You think its crap, ok, I'll give Jay-Z a call for him pull it.

  • I personally never used the word "dated" - we call something "dated" if it's identified strongly with a particular time where that style was fashionable and that's where it derived its impact, from fashion of the times rather than intrinsic artistic merit; therefore, once that fashion passes, it can no longer stand to scrutiny, since its intrinsic artistic value does not pass the test of time and from today's perspective we say it's "dated".

    Let's be clear, just because something is old, does not mean it is "dated" - there is plenty of art that has stood the test of time and impacts us powerfully regardless of age and feels fresh and relevant. We wouldn't call that old art "dated".

    I never said "dated" - I said "it was trite, broke no new ground, just more of the same" - that's the issue, not that it was "dated" in the sense of seeming "old", but simply lacking in originality. I see no vision here - when we see something that's described as brilliant, we expect some artistic innovation, some new ground being broken, something exceptional - otherwise the word "brilliant" stops having any meaning. It's like calling everything "genius" regardless of merit - the word soon loses its impact.

    I'm still waiting to hear what was BRILLIANT about this trite, tired, same-old, same-old, breaking no new ground either technically nor artistically BRANDING PROMO VIDEO (no, not "documentary" and no, not "mini-doc"). But perhaps those who claim it as such have no respect for words and what they mean anyhow, like the whole "documentary" sorry mess showed.

  • Like I said stuff goes in cycles I think its not accurate to say something is 'dated' when its really a style that is purposeful. If some TV show is kind of behind the times a few years yeah thats dated but what we have here is using influences of various styles and eras. So to start looking at the Jay-z (mini doc) its wrong to say its dated when looking at some 80' or 90's music promo which has more than likely directly taken a style that if you want to be accurate is just as likely to of come from 1960's documentaries/movies originally or maybe the photography of NEW YORK of various photographers from God knows when.

    The director is some protege of Anne Leibovitz, its for Absolute which is very cutting edge with its advertising, like people said its been crafted with stylists etc and its for a hip rap artist who is a hot property and is promoting his new music.....so to suggest this is 'dated' is almost ridiculous, its using influences....not the same.

    BTW Spike Lee is still not adverse to retro styles.

    This is only a few years old too.

  • I have on tape(!) a copy of the MTV 10th anniversary show, where they commissioned a whole bunch of promos from film makers like Spike Lee. This Jay-Z film (whatever the brand connection) is almost indistinguishable from the stuff in the MTV show, which mixed up 35mm, 16mm and Super 8mm film. So to say it's dated is absolutely correct - but I still enjoy it stylistically.

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