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Does anyone else think this Jay Z short Doc is brilliant?
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  • @suresure123 Thanks. You are correct; you did not say copy, you said replicate.

  • @Caveport, nice work, it feels very dated but thats always gonna happen with ads which were following a fashion at the time.

    You might find the absolute clip unfashionable and dated due to your age, stuff always goes in cycles. I personally see a lot of 90's throwback fashion at the moment and also I'm seeing a lot of Black and White resurgence, examples include the The Artist, Frances Ha (pretentious shit), Nebraska and Escape from Tomorrow plus a lot of advertising......wait a bit and your Puma advert might become cool again. haha.

    *Just to make clear I NEVER said copy another style, I was saying discuss work in a more elements way so we can talk about what works and doesn't and use ELEMENTS of great of work and use it when appropriate.

  • What we see as "brilliant" is mostly subjective. My only issue is the comment "so we can replicate" which really means copying. If I have misunderstood the intent, then I apologise for being such a pedant! I do not have an issue with using techniques. I have an issue with not having a creative vision & copying someone else. To me (subjective) the Absolut video looks tired and dated; all style no substance.

    Here's something I edited to show I have some work to back up my comments.

  • @RottenCarcass Cause it pieced together shots that most on here would say are shit i.e. noisy, blown out, shaky and made something that looked good. My point was not its the best example of filmmaking since the dawn the man.

  • @caveport: "And it shows in his films."

    Hey, for many that might be a compliment :)... not to get sidetracked on the value of film school, ultimately it's all about the final effect... directors are judged on their films - many famous ones never went to film school, many others did, but that didn't seem to be the determining factor on who is good and who is not... as always, it's about the talent.

    Speaking just for myself, I didn't find this Absolut + Jay-Z branding video particularly great... as a matter of fact, I thought it was pretty trite and broke no new ground, just more of the same; and yeah as others observed, I can see a lot of time was spent editing and in post in general. A lot of work went into it. And by my standards, the ratio of effort to effect was mightily unimpressive. Of course, that's just IMHO and YMMV. If anyone wants to tell us why it's "brilliant" I'm more than happy to listen.

  • there's a doc idea! Absolut proudly presents a day in the life of Quentin drinking Absolut

  • @babypanda I think sometimes Quentin directs while drinking Absolut. So you have to give Absolut some credit. Lol.

  • he's a helluva lot better than Absolut Vodka, no?

  • @babypanda ... And it shows in his films.

  • Hey Doc, how'd ya like some ice cream?

  • @suresure123, you might find this quote interesting.

    " When people ask me if I went to film school, I tell them 'No, I went to films'. " -- Quentin Tarantino

  • @suresure123 I said there were some nice shots in there because that's all there was in that absolut vodka ad. Absolutely no substance. Just jay-z saying he is an artist first and Madison square garden saying they are the epicenter of the performing arts universe. What else is there to say?

    So what was great about it? What was brilliant about it?

    "My point was about the art of filmmaking, about the craft,i.e. bringing together elements that collectively are worth more than the sum of the parts... not aping big budgets with shitty equipment."

    --- ok still don't get it. What are the parts you are talking about? the parts that's go into this video are the people, equipment, actors/characters, money. They had unlimited people, equipment, and whole bunch of money. They had the most famous rapper maybe of all time as the subject and had access to MSG and the president of MSG. So was the video greater than the sum of the parts? Were they able to tell a compelling story?

  • The Shining was one of the creepiest horror movies ever. Maybe Stephen King doesn't like the liberties he took with adapting the original story.

    There's actually a doc called 'Best Worst Movie'. Some 'bad' movies become classics and achieve cult status.

    I was just on Youtube. Here's the little video about The Shining. Not sure if you'll be interested, but here it is fyi:

    How Stanley Kubrick used Escher-styled spacial awareness & set design anomalies to disorientate viewers of his horror classic The Shining.

    ps: this is getting off-topic, but the same guy who made this video also made a video about Kubrick having hidden messages in his movie about the Federal Reserve and gold (hence the gold rooms in the film). Thought that was an interesting coincidence since you were talking about gold in another thread a while back. but sorry, that's way off-topic.

  • hahaha I agree with the point but you aren't to know I'm after a childhood of reading Stephen King am struggling with my love of Kubrick and the fact Stephen King disses him so much.

    If you weren't aware of the troubles between the two:

    http://www.cinemablend.com/new/Stephen-King-Just-Went-Off-About-How-Much-He-Hates-Shining-Again-68032.html

    Its crazy cause even though I love SK I'm not sure I can put him on the par of Kubricks genius or at least I can't agree with him being against the Shining but loves universally all the awful adaptions of his books.

    *One thing in the Kubrick doc I mentioned is Kubrick with his producer would binge watch other movies and apparently even saw things he could use from really cheesy bad movies.

  • @suresure123, Stephen King would agree with you. In his book 'On Writing', he said (loosely paraphrasing) if you don't read a lot don't even bother trying to be a writer. I think it's the same concept for film.

  • @Caveport I couldn't disagree more. So much of filmmaking is learning from what others have done, so I imagine when Martin Scorcese talks at length about other movies that have inspired him and how he has used certain technique or shots or cuts or whatever he has no future in Movies? I'm actually halfway through The Filmmakers Eye by Gustavo Mercado which uses a constant stream of examples to show a technique etc. Just a silly opinion sorry, most filmaking books are really a collections of examples of others work. The point is you learn fro other and make something unique that is yours from the elements, same in music, same in almost all Art. No filmmaker invents the wheel.

    @ipcmir You argument against what I'm saying is I should of used only an example you like? Anyway just cause DSLR's are used doesn't mean its that low budget or not a colossal hassle to make, it had stuntmen for goodness sake in it. Plus it was just another pensive horrible out of focus dslr short, yawn.(and I did sit through it all out of respect for your point) And to be honest I think it looks like a low budget version of a high budget flick. If I went to that much expense and bother to have stuntmen I certainly would of hired a RED camera. If I hired someone to do that level of VFX you can guarantee it would no longer be a low budget short, I assume someone worked a lot of hours on a computer for no pay. Thats the nature of VFX its brain power as most of the software used in even big budgets is available to all.

    I think you think I was suggesting hey we can make great stuff with shit equipment so it looks 75% as good as the mainstream. My point was about the art of filmmaking, about the craft,i.e. bringing together elements that collectively are worth more than the sum of the parts... not aping big budgets with shitty equipment. My point is about being creative, yours is about being cheap when really you want the big budget. Not even the same conversation....

    The problem I really am talking about is when you said oh there are a few great shots in that short. Its not about nice shots, thats where I think all these forums fall down. People trying to make pretty pictures that communicate almost nothing. Its like hey I bought this cool 12mm SLR Magic Lens so I got to use load of wide shots in my short with almost no thought to why...

  • @suresure123 @caveport is right its hard to see what went on behind the scenes just by looking at the final video.

    Your example video or whatever you want to call it was just a bad example for us who don't have a big crew or access to every piece of equipment. We know they had a big crew and a big budget. Can we duplicate that look? Sure. But its a bad example plus for me its not mindblowingly good.

    Why not use a video/film that looks awesome but was shot on DSLRs and tell people doesn't this look awesome even though it was shot on 2 crappy 5d mark 2s like indie game the movie(another fine doc). There were some awesome shots in that movie.

    Or if you want push the agenda of we can do it with cheap equipment then you could have just used this video and called it a day

    Shot with a canon 5d mark 2 and canon 7d. Again, hard to tell from the final product how they even produced this short just by looking at the final product. A lot of skill and experience involved in the vfx.

  • @suresure123 "We should be pulling apart work and seeing how the elements work so we can replicate and learn more IMHO".

    If you want to stand out from the crowd and not be another filmmaker clone, don't copy. Develop your own techniques. Copying styles is why there is so much good-looking but meaningless media at the moment. I'm not criticising the posted video as it's basically ok. It's also ok to investigate how certain techniques are created, but don't copy, you'll disappear into the crowded media landscape.

    I have been editing for over 30 years now and in my experience, watching a finished product will inform you of style, but not technique. You will not see the lighting or post effects that have been added to create a natural looking shot. I know; I do it all the time.

    Book in to a film making class; you will learn twice as much in half the time.

  • I've watched most of the docs on him, A Life in Pictures is the most famous.

  • It's not a brilliant doc. It focuses too much on style and the substance is not that compelling. But many of your points are valid. Kubrick is in a league of his own precisely because he had content and style to the highest levels of mastery. By the way, there's a documentary about Kubrick on Youtube that talks about why he filmed certain scenes a certain way and also The Making of The Shining filmed by his daughter? (can't remember. sorry, it's been a while)

  • The description of the thread was decided in a nano second, I could of called it a music promo, an advert, a viral clip or just some black dude selling Vodka its pretty irrelevant to the point I was making but whatever. I wish people would put some energy into discussing the clip and not the bloody title worded wrongly or not.

    The images are very much possible with cheap cameras and limited resources which is my point. I think its false that many here are separating themselves from this kind of work suggesting they need a 10 man team and a million dollars. Yes quite a few people were involved but in terms of images there is nothing that couldnt be done with the cheap tools we have today. Its kind of like making excuses for yourselves rather than saying HEY I COULD DO THAT, just need to improve my knowledge rather than I need loads of money and a quest for the perfect camera which is lets face it 99% of what this forum focuses on.

    My point is simply as filmmakers we should focus on what we do as an art form not as a technician. Nothing wrong with learning technical stuff but in the end our viewers won't care about a bit of aliasing, noise etc especially at many of us our level which is lets face it 90% amateur professional.

    Something I have recently been inspired by is the fact Kubrick was an accomplished photographer long before he was a filmmaker and learned much of his craft in photography. I highly recommend this youtube channel The Art Of Photography by Ted Forbes. It has tons of resources that you can take into your filmmaking.

  • well, there are some nice shots.

    Is it a brilliant doc? No. But thats just me. It might be for you. For me it looks like a day in the life of Jay-Z, that's its.

    Whats a good doc for me? Something that surprises you, shocks you, inspires you, opens your eyes to something new, or something that is just plain stranger than fiction. This video did none of that for me.

    Docs that I think are great: Hoop Dreams, Spellbound, Murderball, Impostor(this is awesome, blending doc with narrative)

    Do the video's 8mm looking shots look nice? YES.

    Did they have unlimited resources regarding people? YES. There is a long list of people in the end.

    Did they have unlimited resources regarding equipment? YES. These guys have done Gap commercials. This is a video with Jay-Z and Absolut vodka.

    Can I do something that looks like this with less than $10000 in equipment? Probably YES.

    Can I do something that looks like this with less than $10000 in equipment when it was shot in 2010? Probably NO. Canon 5D mark 2 was only 2 years old then, Sony F3 at $16k came out November that year, no one knew who Blackmagic were, and our beloved GH2 was released Aug 2010 and hacked by Vitaly mid 2011.

    In 2010 would I chose a 5D mark 2 and shoot directly at a person sitting on a big glass window with bright sunlight like the way they shot the MSG persident at 2:18 and risk getting a blownout shot while the Absolut ad executives were watching behind the set? NO. I would get a 14dr $$$ sony f35, alexa which came out in 2010, or at least the new sony f3 ($23K) and bring bring big ass lights on the set just in case and maybe a graduated filter.

    So basically I don't think its a brilliant doc.

    I learned that 8mm black and white like footage is good for b-roll in certain portions when you want a gritty look, but you mostly want clean footage when shooting talking heads.

    These guys for sure used a large amount of equipment that i could never afford BUT I can replicate this now since its 2015 not 2010.

    On a side note. I think watching music videos is a great way to see lots of different styles. Some awesome videos out there from some amazing people doing risky stuff and bending the rules.

  • @suresure123, simmer down there, captain. My objection was to calling this a DOCUMENTARY in the very title of your post - nothing else. No, it is not a documentary. Would you call an informercial a DOCUMENTARY? It may be a "documentary style" as you put it, but neither a commercial nor informercial or branding video is a DOCUMENTARY. Documentaries are a specific genre and calling a branding video a documentary is a wrong and an injustice to people who devote their lives to documentaries. It also makes you look naive.

    My points were not anti-Capitalist nor political at all - just stating the facts, that this branding video is between a top extremely rich entrepreneurial performer known for promoting his brand, and a multi-billion dollar vodka company. The point being, this is not some small-money little indi operators who made a "documentary" - this is a sophisticated highly controlled top level commercial branding video. I didn't object to the fact that they did it - that's why I put in the sentence "Which is fine." My objection was wholly to calling this a documentary, when it is CLEARLY NOT, a documentary being its own genre.

    And from that point of view, yes, it makes a difference to the artistic criteria - these people had unlimited resources compared to most people reading these boards or making genuine documentaries out there. The artistic choices were also far more restricted and had to pass through many layers of approval by branding consultants and advertising executives decisions - that's what you are seeing. It doesn't mean there is NO artistic contribution by a director AS I STATED IN MY FIRST POST - just as Ridley Scott has much less scope for artistic decisions while shooting a commercial compared to shooting a feature film (or someone shooting their own documentary). It says nothing about how "stunning" work on commercials can be - that's all YOUR straw man you are attacking... I never said anything else. I just pointed out the obvious. You are upset I pointed out the obvious - but apparently I had to because you WRONGLY mischaracterized this as a DOCUMENTARY and therefore you wrongly assessed the artistic context of the choices made by the filmmaking team here... the team was controlled wholly by branding people - NOT the case with documentaries, which is why it is important to correct your WRONG characterization, and therefore the artistic choices were also within that universe.

    Rather than attack a fellow poster on this site, thank them for correcting your MISTAKES for which no one is responsible but you - attacking the messenger is bad form.

  • @kellar42 Bingo!! someone gets it.

    Art is art wherever it comes from. What is a music video but a short advert for a bands song. Probably some of the best visual artist today are working in advertising, photographers and filmmakers.

    Actually what really interests me is trying to learn from what I see and discuss how it is put together and why it works. This style isn't for everything but for Doc work a music video at least and some indie movies it could work. Pi is basically a similar black and white contrasty style and I heard the director is doing quite well these days. ;) if all we got is cheaper tools I don't see why we can't use them to our strengths. Too many of us are trying to make a blockbuster on prosumer cams and no budget when we should be making visually interesting work and taking risks cause it costs nothing.

    A few observations, I tried out the layering and found it worked if the main layer was on top and the images you want coming through under the track with the top obviously opacity toogled down, the other way around which logically would work didn't look good at all. Its funny but that kind of layering, opacity thing in my mind is the worst thing I see in amateur work but it works somehow in black and white and with these particular visuals, I would use this technique only very rarely to honest, it could looks shit if not used appropriately.

    The actual structure was textbook really, interview cut aways, interview, cutaways then maybe a short segment, interview, cutaways etc. And followed the textbook of show what they say i.e. if the interview is talking about Madison Square gardens then show Madison Square gardens!, its not quantum mechanics. The cut aways tended to be the more imperfect images, I think it works when combined with a more pro looking interview. I don't know but possibly some or all is actually film, 8mm, 16mm. but I'm guessing its just video roughed up a bit. I wondered how they got the out the window interview shots without blowing them out, I'm guessing it was later in the day or as I said its film which could handle it a bit better than video. I would love to know what cameras were used.

    All in all I think I learnt about 3 things I can use possibly at some point...We should be pulling apart work and seeing how the elements work so we can replicate and learn more IMHO.

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